Friday, October 17, 2014

6. Research Paper Thesis

Many American families often eat outside the home because they believe it is beneficial for their family since it appears to be cheap, easy, and quick. Although many people think or behave this way, families should spend more time around their kitchen table rather than eating out at restaurants or fast food chains because it will cause an increase in health, improve adolescent's behavior, and save money.


2 comments:

  1. Your argument is strong. Good job. You outline exactly what you are going to talk about in your paper to prove that you're right. You included the 4 things a thesis should have. Well done.

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  2. You've got an interesting topic here! The thesis is structured well and you have good points that you could say a lot about. The far-reaching affects of something simple like this would be interesting to read about.

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